RESPOND TO JORDAN, PLEASE
September 3, 2008 | Uncategorized
She checks everyday to see if anyone has read her story or tried to solve her riddle. We musn’t discourage a young writer no matter how bad the story needs editing. 
I sure hope she takes a good grammer/writing class this year. perhaps she could simply learn to use paragraphs. Love you jordan!!
3 Responses to “RESPOND TO JORDAN, PLEASE”
DEAR JORDAN:
Please note that a LOT of posts here don’t get responses. It’s not that no one is reading yours, but we haven’t gotten time yet to say anything worth saying.
Now you’re back in school, I’ll bet anything that YOU don’t have as much time now to do all the things you did when it was Summer vacation!
I promise to read your story again, and comment ASAP. I’ve got a trip out of town this weekend, so please be patient. Meanwhile, I’ll bet some others will chime in!
Hope school’s getting off to a good start.
Love, Uncle Bill
By bill on Sep 4, 2008
~Actually, if I ask mom if I can go on the computer on weekdays, I have plenty of time to check. She even lets me write on the computer whenever I want… so yeah. BTW, you way you don’t have much time to respond, but you seem to have had plenty of time to write that long comment for something as simple as this. …Teddy bears. Panda-kun!!!~
By jordan on Sep 4, 2008
aw jordan, I will respond to your stories. and my response its “There great!”
By lainie on Sep 7, 2008