Comments on: Yay

By: bill

bill — Fri, 09 May 2008 03:43:16 +0000

Jordan: The best thing for you to do is create a blog. If you’d like, I can help set one up for you. It can be as simple or as complicated as you’d like, and you can learn a lot of useful things about how the Internet works, etc.

By: jordan

jordan — Fri, 09 May 2008 02:17:55 +0000

~Yeah, how do you do the whole webpage thing. I thought of asking Jason, but he is always so busy and i don’t want to bug him.~

P.S Alaina, i like potatoes!!! =”=

By: Alaina

Alaina — Wed, 07 May 2008 12:20:25 +0000

Lol Nana the last comment made me smile.

By: mother

mother — Wed, 07 May 2008 04:51:14 +0000

Oh, and about grammar. The greatest writers in the world are lousy with grammar. That’s why they have their stuff edited.

By: mother

mother — Wed, 07 May 2008 04:49:55 +0000

Since Jordan still hasn’t done anymore than give constructive criticism, Lanie-Beth, I guess I’ll have to answer for her, and tell you that she liked your”presentation” very much, and wants to do the same thing. (Music, photographs, etc.), but nobody around here has that kind of talent. That, in itself, is a fantastic talent. Just your expressions in the photos, combined with the music, tell a story. I loved it. (And so did Jordan, though she didn’t say so).

By: lainie

lainie — Wed, 07 May 2008 03:25:51 +0000

Its great Allie, by the way I asked Bud about ya’ll coming swimming at my house Saturday. I am buying a grill this week so we can grill out. I think Beth is coming too and bringing Ryder and Dylan. I am sure Ethan will like that.

By: Alaina

Alaina — Wed, 07 May 2008 00:06:31 +0000

I have never been good with grammar, XD And I like books whom dont wait and get to the point.. It gets boring when it stays in one subject.

Heck why does it matter? lol I just sent it for people to enoy

By: jordan

jordan — Tue, 06 May 2008 20:26:51 +0000

~Yes, I do enjoy reading alot; the editor idea isn’t in my thought for the future though. I’m still having trouble with sentence fragments. I’m just stating what I know and how I think the story would be a better book for me. Everyone has different ideas on how books should be writen. Though I like storys that dont go through things quickly, Alaina might like books that get to the point and exiting parts faster.~

By: Bud

Bud — Tue, 06 May 2008 17:29:18 +0000

Allie has always been more of a stream of consciousness writer of intriguing ideas. That is why video and songs appeal to her so much. She always knows exactly who is talking when and to whom and is in a hurry to get the story out there quickly before the idea fades. Editing is a learned and maturing skill. Jordan must read an awful lot:) That is the quickest way to develop it.

By: bill

bill — Mon, 05 May 2008 19:50:13 +0000

Wow, Jordan. At the VERY least, I think you have a future as an editor.

By: jordan

jordan — Mon, 05 May 2008 19:23:47 +0000

~Hi, and I must say, the story sounds interesting. But I only read the first chapter of it. For one, there are many grammar mistakes. Another thing is that I got confused as to who was talking, like when the girls where arguing and one said “Fine.” Then you just made them leave, making me think the sick one had given in, when really the first girl tricked her. I look forward to reading the rest, but perhaps you could make it more descriptive when it comes to talking and evil plots set by the characters. Well, they are only suggestions for the story, so don’t take it personally. I can also understand the trouble of just sitting down and writing the story. Most of the time I can just sit if front of the computer and only write a paragraph, or less! I guess I need to work on my concentration. Tee hee…~

By: mother

mother — Mon, 05 May 2008 03:58:59 +0000

Oh, and incidentally, i haven’t the remotest conception as to what I meant by “How is it going to work”.

By: mother

mother — Mon, 05 May 2008 03:58:03 +0000

You already have a good plot. I like it. You did ALL OF THE PRESENTATION. Well, that cinches it. You’ll have to come down for a couple of weeks this summer and help Jordan with something like that, plus spend a couple of fun days on the beach, maybe hanging out at Maria’s house, and aggravating her, and being in close range to Tony’s house, so all of you can go over and add to the noise level that Holli just loves to endure. If not go to Maria’s…the beach is only 45 minutes from here, depending on which beach you go to. Daytona is only 20 to 25 minutes away, so they say. I’ve never been there.

By: Alaina

Alaina — Mon, 05 May 2008 00:59:22 +0000

I did it all nana, and no its not done… Its hard for me to settle down and do it but I am working on the storyline and so on.lol (laugh out loud) and what do you mean how is it going to work

By: mother

mother — Sun, 04 May 2008 23:13:33 +0000

Well, Lanie-Beth, I have LOOKED, and READ, and I’m very, very impressed! The story grabbed me, and I want to read all of it! Is all of it already online? Did I miss it? Have you finished it? How is it going to work. And the music and the presentation altogether is just wonderful. So, who put that together for you???

By: Alaina

Alaina — Sun, 04 May 2008 06:02:59 +0000

To me, Nana, All age is is more experience in a subject. But I believe that Jordan may surpass me in many levels even at this age.

And I am delighted that she likes my art.

By: mother

mother — Sun, 04 May 2008 03:31:24 +0000

Both of my grand-daughters are FABULOUS!! And I am looking forward to hearing a short story,perhaps presented on Talent night at the reunion.

You are four years older than Jordan, Lanie-Beth, and I’m sure you can be helpful to her. She is WAY dazzled by your art.

By: bill

bill — Sat, 03 May 2008 15:07:04 +0000

Uncle Bill prefers clickable links.

By: lainie

lainie — Sat, 03 May 2008 14:30:03 +0000

We will all very much enjoy reading yours and Jordan’s writings